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your lips speak different colors in the sun
they gather around together and trickle one by one
and the rain keeps coming down down down
the rain keeps coming down

your seed of love was planted on my mind
and all all the memories of us together intertwine
when we said hello i love you goodbye
goodbye my friend goodbye

and all of these things grew into something new
a tree of hope and love and a song for me and you
grace from above falls to the ground

and it keeps on coming down down down
your love keeps coming down down down
your words keep raining down down down
i fall back to the ground down down down down
goodbye my friend goodbye
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:icon7uc4s:
You've gotta an odd talent, Shannon

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:iconrosebyanyothername:
hey. look at this. :)

myspace.com/shannonhebelmusic

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[hearts in unison i'm drawn to your love]
:icon7uc4s:
I'm really impressed, I don't know what to write here...
Your voice is so nice, you got talent! You have to go on and keep writing musics and divulgate them, and I'm sure you'll go very far!

Congratulations, Shannon! :hug::glomp:

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:iconjuiceboxherox03:
wow dude. major props on this one. this is amazing. the best thing ive read in a really long time. can i correct a small grammar error, may not be, and i apoligize if im wrong but it reads "and all all the memories.."
just wondered if it was suppose to read "and all of the memories"
but other than that, beautiful. it painted a picture for me in my mind. (:
:iconrosebyanyothername:
thank you so much! :)

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[hearts in unison i'm drawn to your love]
:iconrosebyanyothername:
thank you!!! :) i'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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:iconeener22091:
i think this is my favorite poem of yours. really good.

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"I want to move on / I want to explore the light / I want to know how to get through, / Through to something new, / Something of my own-"
~"Move On" Sunday in the Park with George
:iconrosebyanyothername:
aw. thanks love. :) i feel really special.

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[hearts in unison i'm drawn to your love]
:iconeener22091:
:D

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"I want to move on / I want to explore the light / I want to know how to get through, / Through to something new, / Something of my own-"
~"Move On" Sunday in the Park with George

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